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Nickname: Macario
Country: United States
City: Denver
State: CO
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Member Since: Oct 20, 2008
Last Login: Dec 24, 2008
Poems Submitted: 9
Average Ranking:
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Poem Comments: 32
Poem Views: 246
Member Comments: 8


About Me
 
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About Me:
Bored as hell. An artist. A musician (and I mean an instrumental musician, not singer or a rapper). Sleepy, Oh so very sleepy. *yawns* Oh I'm black and tall and I hate basketball... What else lets see... I write short stories and draw anime for fun and I sometimes do some sword training.

 


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Is There Such A Thing As Forgiveness emotions Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/04/08 (04:09 PM) 36 7
Collabo - Tools of Destruction life Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/20/08 (04:47 PM) 38 5
Gift of Death emotions Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/10/08 (02:52 PM) 25 5
A Soldier's Story war Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/10/08 (11:29 AM) 28 5
What Tis An Existance? life Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/10/08 (10:58 AM) 25 2
A Poem for Twillight love Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/05/08 (02:26 PM) 32 4
Flux emotions Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 10/21/08 (04:14 PM) 13 2
Untitled philosophical Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 10/21/08 (04:11 PM) 24 3
Fear philosophical Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 10/21/08 (03:58 PM) 25 4

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arrow You left 43 poem comments  
 Commented on the poem "My Life" on 12/05/08 at 03:38 PM
hmm... nice poem I liked the emotion you showed in this peice. Keep doing what you do. And I'm sorry for your loss

 Commented on the poem "Let Me Cry,Let Me Carry This Pain" on 11/25/08 at 10:32 AM
Nice write I liked it, It shows alot of emotion in it. I give it a solid 10 stars

 Commented on the poem "HEARTLESS" on 11/23/08 at 12:36 PM
Hmm... l don't know what to say... I liked the way you tend to play with your words. I give this a solid 9 stars

 Commented on the poem "FREE STYLE" on 11/23/08 at 12:30 PM
This was pretty good. I give it 9 stars. Keep doin what you do

 Commented on the poem "a walk in my shoez" on 11/23/08 at 12:20 PM
Nice write. Keep doin wat cha do.

 
  A Christmas Story -- Lost In A Winter Wonderland
  November 25, 2008 at 10:26 AM
This is a story I had to create for my journalism class for our Christmas Special newspaper thing Enjoy.

A busted radio in a destroyed electronics store suddenly comes to life, transforming the gloomy battleworn city into a less depressing sight. Huddling herself into a ball inside of a car across the street, a little girl tries desperately not to loose her mind as she hugs her teddy bear closer to her and listens to the oh so familiar Christmas song.

"Sleigh bells ring, are you listenin'?" She listens, and aside from the radio, all she hears is an eerie silence in the city, replacing th horrible screams and bombings she had heard earlier. "In the lane snow's a' glistenin'." She takes a quick peek out of the window, and all she can see is black slush, debris, and other things lying in the streets she doesn't wish to even think about. "A beautiful sight, we're happy tonight. Walkin' in a Winter Wonderland." A beautiful sight? Maybe in a fairytale her mother used to read to her before the war hit home; but out here, her once beautiful and happy life was gone. Destroyed by chaos and war. She was alone now, and has been for several hours since the attempted evacuation. She lost sight of her mother and there was a big explosion, so she ran til made it to the car, her last sanctuary.

Looking out of the car, she glances at the desimated streets of downtown. The streets were now empty, except the debris and other things littering the ground, there wasn't a soul in sight; not even a soldier. Slowly and with extremem caution she opens the door and takes a brave step out, walking into the destruction she so fears. She looks to her left and takes another look to her right; the streets were indeed deserted, almost as if the war had left the city like some horrible nightmare. She sighs and closes her eyes, leaning back on the car. Suddenly, the car door unexpectedly closes and makes a large sound. She gasps horrified and takes off running. Hugging her teddy bear even closer to herself, she hides underneath the nearby freeway.

Not long after, a soldier appears by the car and investigates the commotion. After poking around the car hesitently and making sure there were no threats within the area, the soldier makes his way up the street towards the electronics store. Terrorized by the mere presence of the soldier, the little girl slowly backs away from the soldier's line of sight and runs away. Away from the car, her newfound safehaven; and away from the radio, still playing another Christmas song.

How desperately she wishes the war was in some other place and not here at home. How she curses the evil people who hath brought such a thing upon her. How she wishes she were home, safe in her bed, listening to her mother reading another bedtime story to her.

Not paying attention to her surroundings, she runs into something hard and falls down. Shaking her head she looks up to see what it was that knocked her over and gasps in horror at what she hits. A soldier. Of all of the things that she could've hit she hits a soldier. The soldier, hidden by a helmet, looks down upon her.Her body screams at her to run, but held by fear she stays frozen in place. The soldier grabs her, lifting her up; she screams and struggles in resistance. But it is futile, and she is handed off to another soldier who drags her into a jeep surrounded by other surviviors from the city. she cries softly to herself thinking of the horrors that may be unleashed upon herself, until she hears a familiar voice.

"Emile?! Is that you," the voice exclaims. She looks around and sees her mother. Fear is overcome by joy at their reunion as they hug each other, making tearful promises to never leave the other's side again.

The End

 
 
 
 
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mz_April
12/31/08 (05:15 AM)

 
mz_April
12/25/08 (04:44 AM)

 
Wired Poet
11/20/08 (06:26 PM)
thanx

 
Demon of Darkn...
11/16/08 (03:31 AM)
Thanking yo for the comment yo left on our collab.. much respect...

 
mz_April
11/10/08 (09:32 PM)
thank you for the love babii


 
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