Commented on the poem "Broken Happiness" on 12/03/08 at 05:00 PM
dang. ain't this got a lauryn hill and the fugees - killing me softly vibe to it. gotta say that you wrote what i`m SURE a lotta other females feel but just ain't gonna say cause they think its pointless.. " all she really wants out of life is to just be happy " .. last line really did it for me. 10 ! ; leslie .
Hmm. I printed this and been thinking about it all day. Reckless humans gathering together stringing along those who don't know any better to destroy the earth ? Your work is amazing .. it really is; cause this is actually making me think .. get back at me when you have a chance please =) ; leslie .
* passes out * mann .. kinda apartment you livin in ? they are " vagabonds " .. wphew .. its serious then .. hilarious from my viewpoint .. not so much from yours .
Commented on the poem "Hissy Fits" on 10/18/08 at 03:51 PM
--The writings on his balls-- ohkaay. you know DAMM well you need to put that liquor / weed or whatever got chu on this .. hilarious really . 10`s . ; leslie .
Commented on the poem ".basement.bash." on 10/18/08 at 03:24 PM
gasp . brooklyn basements get you into TROUBLEEE ! specially those ones with the little windows where you can see out & no one can look in . hmph . makes me wish i was in SC right now . miss new york trips . gotta get to brooklyn by the end of the month .. sigh . 10 as always ; leslie .
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Commented on the poem "Broken Happiness" on 12/03/08 at 05:00 PM
