this is wrapped in emotion...love your metaphors and how beautifully you flow...you already know this is an excellent written and oh so romantic piece....
but there is nothing wrong with being redundant!!
10 stars ma....
xoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxox
lyric
Commented on the poem "Sex With A Poet" on 12/28/08 at 08:31 AM
i can only imagine!!! u painted a very, very interesting image here....definitely creative and captivating....great job...
xoxoxoxoxoxox
lyric
Commented on the poem "Love Drug" on 12/28/08 at 08:29 AM
i love this write! ''I wonder are you lacing your love
wit a drug'' my favorite line...neva heard of addiction sounding sooo effin sexy...
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
lyric
Commented on the poem "Honestly, I...." on 12/28/08 at 08:25 AM
emotional abrasions....mmm mmm mmm....that did it to me...this was a truly amazing write!!! u did ya thang here...lovin u 4 this!!!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
lyr!c