Commented on the poem "Wilted Petals" on 08/16/08 at 01:48 PM
painfully honest. not an unfamiliar occurence and the consequences can result in a/ or mutliple hearts fatality. raw, T
Commented on the poem "Space" on 08/16/08 at 01:38 PM
argh@typos....**roomyness becomes
Commented on the poem "Space" on 08/16/08 at 01:37 PM
mmm perfect song to cap off this emotion expressed...indeed...finding the middle ground of where enough space is given, so the other can tend to themself, as oneself, but not too much space is given so the roomyness because too large of a gap, is no easy task. yes Ms A....u conveyed this well
love this...its the plight in "guilding" this bubble where many get lost, struggle and it never is given the chance to come to fruition...but WOAH...if it is toughed out and achieved, what a glorious thing it is. lovely ;)
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Commented on the poem "Wilted Petals" on 08/16/08 at 01:48 PM
