this is bleak but understandably so because relationships are so jack'd up. there are some rays of hope in this piece though but it stills bears the weight of the trials and tribulations of love.
Commented on the poem "ready set GO!!!" on 08/08/08 at 09:09 PM
words that a man doesnt want to hear from a woman that he has fallen for. this is a great write because it stays true to reality plus it draws you in, makes you wanna read more and then it guides you to reflect on yourself and see what flaws or past mistakes we have made.
i think it is brave admirable to express that you are who you are for a reason that you accept yourself. this world is so crazy these day and a lot of people can't do that. people have a hard time doing the very things you spoke of this piece. i could go on pointing out all of the good points but it's already late and i dont want to clog your comment board.
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