wow you took my breath i dont know what to say except wow you took all the words out of me this is a really well write and it was well written keep ya pen movin and keep ya head up
wow thease types of things always happen you know but this is a way to find the one for you nice write keep ya pen movin ten starz
Commented on the poem "those eyes" on 08/22/08 at 01:04 AM
wow this poem is so cute but no guy can tell me that cuz i dont show my eyes im always wearin sunglasses so they wont c the truth nice poem very well written keep ya pen movin baby boy
Commented on the poem "Just a Dream" on 08/22/08 at 12:59 AM
wow that jus took my breath away wow this was a real good poem all i can say is wow keep ya pen movin nice write
Commented on the poem "no future" on 08/22/08 at 12:54 AM
wow ive never expeinced gettin stabbed ten times at the same time but i have been stabbed keep ya head up baby boy nice write it was well written and keep ya pen movin aiight
if yall dont know he aint tawkin bout his girlfriend he tawkin bout his 45 gun but this my song
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