Wow.. I'm very impress.. You did a really good job on this one..It's amazing how we can get a subject and everyone can come up with a different outlook.. Nicely penned..
LMAO!! That's funny.. I know.. That was hard trying to write it.. Damn.. the hiccups killed me..*hic*lmao.
Commented on the poem "Love @ 1st Bite!" on 11/20/08 at 12:47 PM
LOL.. I agree with Roxie.. This was way too creative.. I would've never thought about writing it like this.. It's amazing what other poets come up with as I read the threads.. Very nice..
smh... This hits so hard, and I am so overwhelmed with emotions.. I wish I could have came across someone that could have showed me love as a father.. Instead I had drunk as a father, no real man I could run to.. Never really had anyone to talk to because my mother was only 15 when she had me, so she let my father run over her, and she never really treated me like a child, so I was sexually abused between the ages of 3-5 and I kept it inside of me till I turned 22..I had no one to run to...I couldn't hold it anymore..but instead of getting a hug, and saying I'm sorry for your pain, I got a cold shoulder.and I too had turned to suicide when I was in high school, but you know some people are not meant to leave...I find myself alone within my family.. but Fuck all that.. That shit has made me stronger person.. And now I have my children that keep me together.. I feel you so much in every word.. and It's painful to see someone go through so much.. *crying* My blessing are always with you ma..
Commented on the poem "Heat-Rising" on 11/18/08 at 03:39 PM
lmao.. I agree it did have some funny parts, but you could also sense the aggravation.. Still I believe you did a great job.. DAMN it though.. I should did this as a response.. Could I go back and change it? LOL
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