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"Love (In a Bubble)"
  by Angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Teacake & Janie by Angel


When in the care of
your hands
I am
safe

Completely out of
harms way

A protective bubble
our love creates as the world
spins on uncontrollably

Unable to find for themselves
the very thing

that we

share

They’re there

We’re

here

Tucked away
from life’s disabilities
in love

The deafness
The mute tongues
The blind eyes

We see poetry in love’s disguise

Draped up in perfection -
our protection
from the average mortal’s demise

Here,
we hide

behind our protective shield

Reside

where love
not only flows
but fills
the space in which
we dwell

Comprised
of endless memories

Injecting you and me
with the immortality of Gods

For though our spirits move on
we both live and breathe
within the
other’s heart

In love and life
we seem to
stand
apart
from the world

One heart

incubated

forever insulated

In
love


** Ya'll remember the little boy in the bubble... with the deadly illness... well, this write takes that concept, and... runs with it... just a bit... lol **


02 Enchantment.wma - Corrine Bailey Ray

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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (11:43 PM)
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  Jamillah
08/18/08 (02:26 AM) 
hey hey.. look at u.. tucked away from life's disablities.. in love.. the deaf(ness), the mute tongues.. the blind eyes.. clever girl.. with u.. love seems so possible.. i mean the kind of love thats mutual and beautiful.. and long-lasting through tumultuous times... sounds lighthearted and fun... comforting... safe... loved this.

  Syndel
08/15/08 (06:12 AM) 
Tucked away from life’s disabilities in love * I felt this line just a little much cause once hurt you tend to keep what you have left inside not wanting anyone to touch so we keep it in the bubble safe go on and work it Angel I feel ya

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