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"Love Conversation"
  by Quash


Me: "No one wants to see us together,
so what are we to do?"

Him: "To tell you the truth baby, I really have no clue!"

Me: "If I break it off with you, then I know you and I won't be happy,
but if I stay with you, we'd always have to worry."

Him: "I won't be happy if you leave me, but I don't want you to feel bad
and everytime I see you, I don't want you to look so sad."

Me: "But how can I be happy if I can't be with you?" When will there be joy, I
want our love to be true!"

Him: "I feel the same way, but we'll have our secret love." "No one will
have to know, just keep it between us."

Me: "Will I be able to see you, will you even come by?" Will you miss me, will you
still be in my life?

Him: "You know that I'll miss you and I'll still be in your life, but I can't come
visit, you know I can't come by."

Me: "I understand baby and I'll say goodbye tonight, and when I awake in the
morning everything might be alright.

Him: "Ha!" I'll dream about you baby, and this is for real, and when I awake in
the morning, everything will be gravy, I promise it will.





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Date Submitted: Feb 12, 2008 (01:34 PM)
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  DIZZLE
02/20/08 (12:43 PM) 
AWWWW!!!!!! THIS is da biz!!! I love thoe convo approach, that make it a little more realistic... and you put a nice spin when you added the secret love part cuz most couples would just break and leave it at that

  Lil'MizzAnonym...
02/13/08 (11:12 AM) 
i like it but maybe you should make it longer...but all in all its really good

  AO
02/12/08 (09:36 PM) 
I like your Flow. Bless you poet.

  *BaBy-NaTiVe-S...
02/12/08 (01:58 PM) 
iM lIKING tHIS pOEM yOUR fLOW wAS gOOD gIRL. 10 sTARS fROM mE sTAY uP

  blacrob
02/12/08 (01:55 PM) 
uh oh somebody creepin lol this is some deep stuff, you should make it a story. i personally wanna know, WHY he cant see you. is it another lover? lol but its a good write, and honestly its a write you could turn into something bigger

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