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"Lost Foundation"
  by Blakfiya


Wind Storm 02 - HRB Music
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Concrete structure poured
gave base
Higher learning let framework
take shape
Material used of good value
with struggle's price
Created a home described by most
as quite nice

But...

wind blew shutters
ripped the roof off its moorings
elements clapped, rain began to pour in
Mold formed from the constant humidity
devastated by virulent things getting into me

Condemned the structure,
as wood was warped
and floor boards became unstable
temporary shelter erected
so I could build when I was better able
raised new standards, enforcing the code
reinforcement for sensory overloads

now I'm good

original principles supporting construction
now storm resistant and built in direct proportion
with experience providing the learning curve
to house my valuables so they're best preserved
figuring...
Sometimes the wind's going to huff and puff
but sometimes it'll knock you down to call your bluff
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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 (03:52 PM)
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  mindigoblue
08/18/08 (09:09 PM) 
Very much enjoyed this. Lessons learned are many times after trials and tribulations. You expressed this very well.

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
08/18/08 (08:32 PM) 
umm sounds like when you trust people or allow certain experiences to cause storms in your life but you live learn & weather through them...

  Jody
08/18/08 (07:11 PM) 
damn that wind! What I take from this is as long as you get back up to rebuild then the wind hasn't gotten the best of you. Nice analogy.

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/18/08 (07:08 PM) 
True indeed queen. Remembering thinking that I was strong with strength till life blew havoc upon my horizons. Has to rebuild a much better wiser me. Awesome masterpeice as always.............

  One
08/18/08 (05:35 PM) 
Started off well....seemd built solid...shit got corrupt n then fucked up...I feel u

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