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"Keep Ya Clothes On"
  by Mr. RTJ


What it is shawty, mind if I holla at you for a minute?
See that car over there, baby girl I'm trying get you up in it
Now hold on, pump ya breaks, trust your time you'll wisely spend it
Because what I want requires your outfit, you need to stay in it

Baby girl keep ya clothes on because what I need requires them
I need mental and spiritual stimulation, have you acquired them
Don’t forget emotional stimulation, do you desire them
Then finally physical stimulation, all four corners, I admire them

Mental stimulation, means you must be sharp with the intellect
Have something interesting to talk about, please don’t forget
That he said, she said, I said who cares, that's a quick way to wreck
Remember this while you keep ya clothes on, I'm trying to connect

Spiritual stimulation, means you have faith and you know right from wrong
Life gets hard but you keep looking up knowing you'll be kept strong
And not just being good but having morals all day long
Baby girl try to remember this while you keep ya clothes on

Emotional stimulation, means you are sensitive to how others are feeling
When someone is sad and you lend a shoulder, now that's really appealing
You open up your heart and spread your care with no concealing
Is it starting to add up, because I still don't want you revealing

Physical stimulation, now were talking about eye candy
Can't be sloppy, got to have respect for self, not a beer belly full of brandy
And keep up maintenance so you won't mind showing off at the beach and getting a little sandy
Or you can keep ya clothes on and it will be just fine and dandy

Now in my time, I've seen you can learn a lot with the dressings still on
And hopefully you'll understand before you tell me to get gone
And I hope to see you take these four corners of stimulation as you travel along
But baby girl I'd really like for you to take a stroll with me, just remember, keep ya clothes on

6/1/2006
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Date Submitted: Apr 19, 2007 (10:34 PM)
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  Vocab Vixen ak...
08/07/08 (06:53 PM) 
Thats Amazing! I love that... great way to really get to know someone.. a betta way.. instead a jumpin in bed first then asking questions lata.. great write! you know i love what you write!..

  Cryssy-Rashad
06/03/08 (09:33 PM) 
reading this actually make me want to believe that there are men out their that want me for more than what's under my clothes. I like the way you point out that women have more characters than just physical that needs to realized. It also shows other women that some men have feelings similar to us that some want to get to know our mind & body not just our bodies. I love this write.

  JuztBlu
05/14/08 (09:24 PM) 
Baby girl keep ya clothes on because what I need requires them I need mental and spiritual stimulation, have you acquired them Don’t forget emotional stimulation, do you desire them Then finally physical stimulation, all four corners, I admire them" beautifully expressed i love this piece because it an appreciation of real women who knows that love is found within the soul and not in the clothes wonderfully composed a fave for me

  Atl_Breezy18
03/19/08 (03:08 PM) 
i love it ... i love it... i am happy that i did decide to read this one.... its good to hear an guy tellin the females to keep there clothes on and still wanna talk to them..

  Peachess
02/25/08 (01:03 AM) 
This is def. a fav.....alot of guys have forgotten that there is so much more than taking a females clothes off...love it!

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