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"JUST ONE NIGHT II"
  by A.C.H.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem No He Didnt by touchdapearl2


I am at your door because I have a vested concern
that you were now pregnant I have come to learn.

I hear that you have something growing inside of you
I came to see you to see if it was true.

Do you think I still want your sex?
After I had you all I did was say "NEXT"!

But I hear you are about to have my baby
Abort that thing because I want one with a real lady.

Not some woman I can sleep with in a night
Someone worth having and giving delight.

So cut this mess out and get out of my sight
Woman I done told you it was just one night.
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (05:02 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 08/18/08 (10:45 PM)
Author: WarmNillaSuga
Poem Title: Just One LIFE....

Date: 08/14/08 (05:24 PM)
Author: touchdapearl2
Poem Title: One nite stand gone ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (57)
  DeepThinker7
11/13/08 (01:03 AM) 
See, this work is raw and quite direct. All I can say is WOW...

  TWANGINU
11/09/08 (01:01 AM) 
OK.IM FEELING YOU...BUT ABORTION IS WRONG..YOU HAD SEX WITH HER SO..BUT THE WRITE WAS GOOD

  bookitty
09/14/08 (07:08 PM) 
wow that was really....whew, it's making me relive my own situation. this poem really makes the reader empathize. it has always amazed me how you capture such emotion in short lines and stanza. this really shows your flexibility as a writer... Boo Kitty

  The Mad Poet
09/05/08 (04:39 PM) 
Damn those are some harsh words...unfortunately several men say the exact same thing...personally I can't relate I think kids are a blessing....but thanks for giving us your opinion on the subject

  Roc_City_Poet
08/21/08 (09:36 PM) 
That Was A Hot Poem I Enjoyed That

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