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"inevitably fallin"
  by 11th Wonduh


(((villanelle)))

product, caramel uncut, prepackaged w/ a scarlet rose tat
invitation to opennuss, midnight, unbelievable jones
residual, her sensual hydro, i inhale, then fall into a subconscious relapse
.
dopenuss is absolute, so gone, exhaling her metaphoric residue
vertically posted gainst this wall, shotgun inhalin
inexplicably, embrace her succulent precipitation, i submit to her truth
.
exposed as her amaretto mocha, flavorful & robust
as we lean back, let this melody from sexual healing soothe
subsequently, she's my salacious caramel, uncut
.
to quote d'angelo, "i gets high off of your love & don't know how to behave"
metaphoric hydro, chronic level potent, trust me, won'duh's open
vibe is hypnotic, peripherals interlocked, as we both lie in a daze
.
sacrifice is exorbitant, as last time, brown'suguhcocaine jones
matriculated into a full blown addiction, division of her thighs
opennuss in exchange for one who lies naked & juxtaposed
.
acrid scent & haze, refreshes senses, beautifulnuss, fuck intervention
rehab only diminished my sensuous brownsuguh'cocaine jones
unable to eat, sleep w/o her essence in my system, shit i can't function
inevitably fallin', as she straddles in my lap, preparing for sensuous crushin

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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 (12:55 AM)
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  Sharun
10/18/08 (06:45 PM) 
dang nice write you gotta way with words that cant be duplicated your poetry is really one of a kind i enjoyed reading this....keep the pen movin.

  AzIz
09/06/08 (07:53 PM) 
Torrid script!

  Just Me...
08/25/08 (11:44 PM) 
Sounds erotic to me... deep spin on your feelings. I really liked this one. Keep 'em coming. :)

  Snickaz
08/14/08 (02:27 AM) 
damn....that's wat i want mah first tyme to be like. yea i'm a yungin(17).lol. but seriously this was a really gud poem. i cud paint this picture in mah head and actually visualize the love that the two have. i can see the tyme taken and the pleasure give. great write. 10 stars...

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/14/08 (01:04 AM) 
excellence

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