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"Incorporation of Life"
  by Chocolatezeus




Tampered evidence
Of negative escalation
Stairway to hell
Living as a denizen of disparity

Ripping through garbage
Submerged in carnage
Everyday surviving
An honorary blessing

Throwing cards in
Russian roulette
Unprepared for the next
Corporal punishment
Unjustified crucifixion

Tampered evidence
Destined to fail
Fighting the grey whale
While Ahab controls everything

Stalemate
Bring you down
Mentality
As they procreate
Your future abilities

Stunned
No where to turn
Tripping over
Yours and their feet
Caught in the world’s
Fatality

Finishing move

The destruction of
You and me
As they redeem
Their domination of

Minds
Souls
Bodies

Grinning with glee
Satisfied with
Despotism
As they happily
Remain contemplative

Realizing
That they hold all the cards
Knowing they are destined to win

Until

Reality crashes
There is no known
Conformed genome
To keep captive

The human will




From the chocolatezeus collection 8/5/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Aug 05, 2008 (04:20 PM)
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  LyricallyDelic...
08/12/08 (03:18 PM) 
Word play impeccable, flow no less than exceptional. This has depth and clarity without punching me in the face with your perception of reality.

  `Scriptixz
08/06/08 (06:01 AM) 
*shakes head* this was just so...brilliantly delivered! i read it twice just to let it marinate that much deeper- intense and so so true!!! i absolutely love your wording and the metaphors are sicc!!! i like how you kept it subtle abstract and you didn't go too deep with it- i'm sure had you...*smiles warmly*

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/06/08 (12:19 AM) 
daammmmnn dude ill as concept dude

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