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"i spit it out"
  by DjWop




ayyy!

i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out




[verse]
now i spit this shit out
and its coming out of my snout
and u beter not fuckin pout
ayy remember my girl u fucked in this club
thats fuckin crusty u cow
now ii rap this shit with a 9mm
and fuck this u tmn


ayyy!

i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out
i spit it out

[verse]
remember what i SAID bout tmn
u are rally fuckin crazy u 9mm
yeh this is dss you fuck ith us u fuck with 9mm
my best friend tmn
wow im gussing im really right u suck on your friends 9mm
and i disted your up so badly u fuckin cramn

[ending]
when im done this song im done with you u crsuty ass hoe
when im done go suck on my toe
HOE

writed by [DJWop] aka louie
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (03:12 PM)
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  A.Renee
08/20/08 (11:42 PM) 
damn da people before me was kinda hard on u, this different, it would get a party started, i aint gonna give u 10 but 8.

  Babiee Boo
08/20/08 (10:06 PM) 
this is pretty gudd, but you have to make some of it make sence too so 7 stars for noww

  ransom
08/20/08 (03:26 PM) 
wow yo this is alright but not really you need to get better at flowing n all that shit ghost said its better then you first one lmfao is this about dee lol random but ye you get 4 stars its fucked up tho lmao i dont wanna be mean but this is not that good lmao

  'x'GhOsT'x'
08/20/08 (03:18 PM) 
this is better then your first one but its still pretty bad keep trying to improve 2 stars this time LOL

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