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"I......."
  by KiNg-Go0B3r


i kissed you cheeks when you needed to feel love
i was your neosporen when you got cut deep
and regular bandaides couldn't heal you
i gave you that faith you needed to get through the hard times
i gave you the strength to lift these weights of tretchory
gave you the will to keep going when you endurance was low
i gave you the wisdom of a person way beyond their years
i helped you up when you fell so deep in the well
i gave you a drink when your were thristy
let you have every last drop not saving any for me at all
i let you lean on me when the wall gave up under your pressure
i let you hop on my back when you couldn't walk or run let alone crawl
i gave you wings so you could soar to your dreams and back
i gave you the spirit to ignore others scorn
i gave you the mentallity of a warrior so you could have the courage to go farther than the eye could possibly see
i gave you the eyes of a hawk to seek out all thoughs who wish to betray you like the new age judus
i gave you food when your were hungry
let you fill your appetite no matter how large it was
i let you ride on training wheels til you were sure you were ready for th etwo wheeler
i gave you what you wanted from time to time so you wouldnt be spoiled
i nursed you back to full health when others didn't give two shits whether you were takin gthe big nap or just resting your eyes
i.....wait.....you did this for me......how could i ever repay you for this
i really can't...honestly
all i can do is be your friend
show you that i care
be there when you need me
listen and help you
but.....will that be enough to pay you back for what you've done for me????

*I COULD NEVER REPAY YOU BACK FOR WHAT YOU DID MAMA*
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (12:23 AM)
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  Brooklyn107
08/21/08 (05:04 PM) 
this is so beautiful ur work always flows so pretty an deep!

  Blakfiya
08/21/08 (02:34 PM) 
awww. I love it, man. (blinking back tears) love it. I hope you showed this to her because it is payment enough, I know.

  African Queen
08/21/08 (01:13 PM) 
Aww..look at ya getting all sweet..lol! nice one Goob

  Lara
08/21/08 (08:24 AM) 
beautiful!!!!

  DL Martin
08/21/08 (06:41 AM) 
haha, yeah saw that twist coming. Feel the same bout my moms yo. All you can do is show her that all the time and tears she spent on u were not in vain, ya dig?

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