Graphed my lifes strategy in the shower going
Over plans that were predicted, paying particular attention
To paths chosen on a whim - versus
Lengthy lines laden with actual equations and
Overt demonstrations of
Situations that work over
Time
Though the quick and easy
Hit me immediately
I
Saw everything clearly…
Moving from the house to the car
Ordering up yet another
Re-assessment, Mulling over
Never ending internal debates
Inequities complex enough to stall
Notions simple state of being
Got-Damnit! I drove right past my exit….
Now see, poetic pieces like this dawg are what inspire me to wanna write of more substance, just can't get outta this freaky mindset, lol! Seriously, I dug this mayne!
ok...now this has to be one of the best Acrostics I've read thus far, but then again look who is its author...the last line had me cracking up tho..except my crazy self wud hv missed the exit and probably got lost sumwhere ...lol..Wonderful job...wouldn't expect anything less ;-)
1Lv
wow..... you went a little deep here buddy...hhmmm.... maybe you should stay lost and find a new path or get back on the road that you know. either way... its going to lead you somewhere that you should feel right at hoe with.... meanwhile... WHAT IN THE GEIGHNESS IS THIS ISH MAN! you ole.. .flashback into the 80's ass nig! ctfu...pfffness.
Damn fam, i got so wrapped up in what was being said that i overlooked the fact that this was an acrostic at first lol. But yea my dude the way you linked this joint together was mad slick. Much respect for this. And next time keep an eye out for that exit lol. - T.I.D.
Showcase Your Poem
Styles C's PREVIOUS POEM 
© 2000-2008 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
POEM RESPONSES (0)
