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"Hugging Shadows"
  by Blakfiya
  - This Poem is a response to the poem QUEEN OF DARKNESS by DaRk KnIgHt


Deep Forest Meditation - Enigma
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H-eld in contempt of Hapless Happy,
U-ndergoing arrhythmia’s acute attacks,
G-rimaces drew back skin stretched thin
G-iving gaunt grins prominent chins that
I-ndebted she in
N-igritude’s grace; accepting abysmal space
G-irl getting lost in the dark

~(found)~

S-olace skulking amongst the dreary
H-aving not to put on comedy’s face
A-ttracting He whose cloak doused rainbows
D-rawing her firmer into the nook of his harbor
O-din, proclaiming her mortality dead offering
W-orlds of darkness to swim past remembrance
S-hading light from red pupils dilating
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (11:13 PM)
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  Soul Lyrikal
08/17/08 (12:54 PM) 
Shading light from red pupils dilating was the perfect ending! Given the BG and all.. this also blended well with DK's piece.

  PanthaG
08/16/08 (08:58 PM) 
absolutely killa!!!!

  mindigoblue
08/15/08 (08:06 PM) 
This is an excellent dark acrostic piece. I am most definitely enjoying your versatility.

  Syndel
08/15/08 (06:09 AM) 
this is the pick up from Knight very well expressed the creativity is alive and you feel the hug def felt the somber exhale = flavorlishas

  DaRk KnIgHt
08/15/08 (02:45 AM) 
BOWS HEAD, ASTOUNDING, AND TO MY FAV PIECE OF MUSIC BY ENIGMA... DANG I LOVE DIS.... ITS GOING ON MY FAV FOR SURE.... DK

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