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"Homicidal Thoughts"
  by J Mello


I was walkin home from work one day just breezin in the wind trying to get my mind straight
my stomach bubblin from this bullshit feel like crappin an earthquake
feel like tina turner on ikes birthday(eat the cake)
but I aint annimay, im bout to beat this bitch ass
I know she been cheatin on me time to get her ass back
even since my homeboy said she saw her givin my neighbor head
I had a plan to leave em dead in the same bed she violated me in
I heard em humpin when I came thru the door
it was mens and womens clothes laid all over the floor
she was screamin from wat he was doin but there was more in store
for the stupid whore dumb broad I tied a rope around the doorknob bowed it tight made for no escape made sure the double paned windows were barred so they couldnt break
stayed quiet went down to the garage
pulled out a machete ready to make it a minage
this end is goin straight up his ass get the alcohol for the bloody wound
and ima stuff the other end straight into my baby mothers womb
get my gun just incase out buddy feelin courageous
my shotty will send 9 holes through his little bird chest
rush up stairs tripped get up b4 they hear
3 steps 2 step down the hall im almost there
kick the bitch open like the fuckin 50
wavin my gun shootin yellin YOU STUPID HO
he jump out the bed buttnaked woody still in the air
I chop the shit out his faints blood n nutt splurtin everywhere
her bitch ass screamin still nude
his dumb ass barely blurted out wat the fucks wrong wit this dude
I start stompin him get tire n swing my sword
She curled up in th covers yellin oh Lord
but she aint safe im finsta kill ha ass skin ha alive wit a cheese grater
put her in ice throw her in the fridgerator n save her till later
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (01:16 AM)
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