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"HOLD YOU DOWN..."
  by Butterfly Child


Baby you're it,
And you know i love you,
Nobody could do me like you do,
And i give you my word,
I'll hold you down...

No one can change what i feel for you,
Nobody could stop me from loving you,
Nobody but God,
But why would he want to destroy something he made,
Now its up to us to make this last,
Best believe I'll do my part...

Baby when you feel like giving up, You know i got you,
I'll pull my weight to put a smile on your face,
When you falling, I'm right here to catch you,
When you secretly crying, i'll share your burden,
And when you need me to make you feel good,
I'll make love to you till the sun comes up,
And be right beside you when the day breaks...

When money ain't coming in like it use to,
I promise it wont be the reason for us to end this,
I'll do my best and be standing right next to you, holding us together,
Looking sexy for you 24/7,
Text you when you away and let you know I'm thinking bout you,
But know when to give you your space, and let you do you...

Baby i love how you love to love me,
So i promise to show you what love's truly meant to be,
Not the hoe fucking, golding digging kinda love,
But how it feels to be loved by a real woman,
Appreciate you, respect you, and claim you,
And i wont leave your side till you tell me to,
Long as you do me right...

For the difference you've made in my life,
Baby I'll hold you down...
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Date Submitted: Aug 01, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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  Quite
09/09/08 (02:45 AM) 
oh wow nice

  B. Rose
08/01/08 (04:03 AM) 
Awww.. this beautiful... its alwyas good to find someone that will hold you down as much as you hold them down...

  Chocolate City
08/01/08 (03:19 AM) 
this is the most sincere poem ive read so far.. its easier to say all them things than to actually do it.. but its good to know we still have sum down ass chicks

  Demon of Darkn...
08/01/08 (12:56 AM) 
BEAUTIFUL PIECE, NICELY EXPRESSED THE EMOTION CUMS THROUGH AT YHA.. I LIKE THE WAY THE DROP FLOWS SO WELL .. AND THEM CLOSING LINES ARE FIYAH.. DK

  Lil Lexis
08/01/08 (12:29 AM) 
Hmm.. ok i can see it now.. but im not gonna read it.. since u dont want me to..

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