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"His Pedestal"
  by Ayisyin


You put him on a pedestal
Like he's better than me
Like HE's the MAN
That I should aspire to be
But Wolves can sense wolves
When they're dressed in sheeps clothing
They know predators
And can see the teeth showiing
You crucify me....
For the same sins he's done
Yet i'm supposed to believe
That my place is number one
His love is undying
He's faithful to you
So he does things annatural
that other men wouldn't do
He got you tangled in his web
The deceit you don't see
but
evryday he grow bold
And arrogant to me
He starts online
That's where you said I was cheating
then the PHONE CALLS
with references of you and him beating
You go to his house at 1:00 oclock iin the morn
That's when his reaction
Goes out of the norm
He wants you comfortable
cuz he wants you back
not a one night stand
where he won't see you after that
/he calculated his method
He a REAL MAN to you
but all he did
was pull the wool over you
He'll ask you back
Move a bit closer
Hold you close to his chest
he gona be a real poser
Yoiur man on the pedestal
he really ain't slick
all he doin
is the long route to his dick
Do what you do
Cuz one day you gonna see
He really is that boy
that I said he would be
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Date Submitted: Aug 02, 2008 (01:33 PM)
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  touchdapearl2
08/17/08 (10:51 PM) 
wow i want express how i can relate to this piece! she was I,but not anymore this piece couldnt been wrote any better! hot write

  Ye Cre
08/15/08 (12:30 PM) 
Hit this one to close to me... this my fav right here...Stay Blessed

  African Queen
08/05/08 (03:56 AM) 
you should keep writing yo cos your scribes show true talent evolving....10*s

  prolificlydeep...
08/02/08 (02:30 PM) 
you know this is a great write! Keep ur pen pushing baby!

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