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"His Mistakes"
  by Miss Self Sufficient
  - This Poem is a response to the poem BEING A FRIEND by TWANGINU


i just don't want to consently:

Bring up the pain he put me thru

I don't want to compare the two

I don't want you to see me cry

I don't want for you to end up saying bye

I don't want to accuse you of things he did to me

I don't need for his dirty deeds to take the best of thee

I don't need to blame you for his mistakes

And i don't need to remind myself of the pain and aches..

Maybe one day i would be able to give my all to you

Till then your friendship will do..

thanks for always being there

Reminding myself..LIFE ISN'T FAIR

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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (12:52 AM)
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  Dana Dane
11/24/08 (02:40 PM) 
Awww... this was so heartfelt!! I could feel your emotion.

  B. Rose
11/24/08 (10:58 AM) 
Well I liked how this was written you know that its not right but you know its oing take sometime... so until you can full pass that you will take friendship

  hiswife0926
11/24/08 (08:27 AM) 
Very true.. nice write

  KD the King
11/22/08 (03:12 PM) 
This was sweet and sentimental. I could see you holding his hand and speaking to him ever so gently in a voice of hurt and disappointment. Beautiful job

  Essence D
11/22/08 (01:05 PM) 
No it isn't fair but neither is blaming him for another mans plight.. Nice work

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