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"His fragrance"
  by Stoykes
  - This Poem is a response to the poem TAKING A WALK by TWANGINU


while at work I am briefly taken aback
stocking clothes on the shelf in the mens department
when for just a moment I sense I smell you near
dropping the shirts on the floor I turn around but don't find you
it's just a customer breezing past but instantly.......I remember
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I REMEMBER
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the conversations we used to have
us walking in the park hand in hand
you pushing me on the swing in the park
the two of us making out by the slide once it got dark
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I REMEMBER
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you gave me a hicky on my neck bright as day
the trouble my mom gave me when she grounded me the very next day
then I remember us being older and you telling me you want to see someone new
remember it well having kept the receipt of the cologne I had just bought you

now I play on the memories every time someone passes with such a scent
but i'm still loving you and missing all the time together we've spent

(sigh...much like picking up the pieces of my life, let me pick these shirts up and get back to work)

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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (09:53 AM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/12/08 (02:07 AM) 
divine fragrances specially w/ someone you were diggin can have such a profound effect. nice write

  Miss Self Suff...
12/04/08 (09:26 PM) 
Aww this was sweet..and sad.. girl i love your way of writing.. this here took me back... 10*s

  Will charles
12/03/08 (09:36 PM) 
DAMN I truly love. Man forreal this is me now sadly I'm tricking myself to think im over my last when im not. And just the other day I swore i saw her in a familiar place. Man its crazy how the littlest of things can trigger so many memories. I love the way you told the whole set up of being at work and how u stop and remanece a bit and have to pull yourself back together and carry on with work. Man, this is a 10.

  Demon of Darkn...
11/24/08 (12:41 PM) 
TIGHT FLOW, DRAWING ON ONES OWN EXPERIENCES THAT ARE OFTEN PAINFUL.. MASSIVE UP DK

  TSMALLSz
11/22/08 (11:43 PM) 
girl i love this. the flow was amazing the visuals i loved. keep up the good work

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