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"HipHop Hindsight: Bring the Pain"
  by Beautiful Soul
  - This Poem is a response to the poem HipHop Hindsight: It's a Good Day by SylenceThePOET


Method Man - Bring The Pain -


Transparent{less} Soul
Solidifying concepts
Birth Beast from Beauty

Killing me softly
Stab with blunt delivery
Are you serious?

Battering eyelids
Lick my clit poetically
I fuck mentally

I’m a poet, Son
Smash me metaphorically
I bleed through my pen

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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 (11:47 AM)
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  Kat Nicole
09/03/08 (01:13 PM) 
nice nice nice. "lick my clit poetically/ i fuck mentally" one of the hottest lines in this piece. you truly are a poet. 10 starzz- Kat

  XPERIENCE
09/03/08 (01:17 AM) 
damn how did i miss this! i loved it..."Killing me softly Stab with blunt delivery Are you serious? Battering eyelids Lick my clit poetically I fuck mentally I’m a poet, Son Smash me metaphorically I bleed through my pen " SAY WHAT!!! loved this... i agree braggadocious but hella koo!

  African Queen
09/01/08 (03:35 AM) 
aite yo....hot piece!!! real HOT!!

  BruthaT
08/05/08 (11:04 PM) 
~~~Battering eyelids Lick my clit poetically I fuck mentally~~~I am soo turned on right now....Mentally that is!!! LMAO!!! Hot Drop!!

  One
07/22/08 (07:42 PM) 
loving this...this is an alltime fave track. and you did your thing...much love

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