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"Hiding Pt. 2 (Responce 2 Babi Wiggles)"
  by Ticole
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hiding by baby wiggles


I push u away, when I wanna hold u close
I dnt want 2 kno Im feelin u deep like dat
Dats somethin Im not ready 2 share wit you rite now
U look @ me an smile I look back with a mugg
Hold me hand and I shake you off
Wat if Im scared?
Im so used to havin my guard up I just dont kno how to let it down
The world is hard....y not be harder?
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (03:29 AM)
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  baby wiggles
08/21/08 (03:32 AM) 
this is how i feel im glad you captured that very well written ten starz

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