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"Her String's Melodies..."
  by 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Lion..Soul Of Zion
  - This Poem is a response to the poem MY REALITY by LaCherie


Beyond the Curve's of Her Verve..or the Spoken of her Word's...which is Obserd...more so cause's it's profound beyond Word's Worth...Her's is A Worth..More then Any Hurt this Earth Could Work....

Her Spirit's broken...Soul's Misused...Dude's Confused Cuz Queen's Beyond the Jewel's...of her Thigh's Surprise...And her Eye's Insite Spark's that Fly And Imply..God's Cry..On this Earth's Axis...her Plane Uncharted Terrain..but the Eden of her Love's Plain's..Obtained?Un-ex-plained...like How Rain Ease's Pain's..and in the Same..make's them Hurt again....But In her Wind I stand...while the Mist Create's this...Poetic Bliss...Just Wish...Her's was the Wound's I could Kiss..and Reconstruct with..My Touches...Tip....Cause Her Face was Made 2 smile..and Heart was Forged In Passion...Her Eye's Allow Beauty's Proud..Nature..not Boastful..but Known...And It's Sad that Man truly never take's the time 2 make it Known..that It's not Queen's Mean's...the Hidden behind the Jean's Theme that Make's her 2 Good 2 Be True...Not the Kitty's Purr that Inflict's Uphoric..bliss 2 you that Make's her A True...Catch....it's the Speck of Her Complex...Complexion..beyond outside's Text....It's that of Which No Man Can truly See...Just Feel....If God Will's it 4 their understanding 2 Reveal how REAL...She Is....Question That plaque's My Mind is?......Does Queen Know This?

Canon - violin
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (10:49 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/19/08 (08:14 PM)
Author: Untouched_Soul
Poem Title: His Contradicting Tr...

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  itsnmysoul
11/16/08 (08:18 PM) 
as always.. your writing is amazing

  lyric1985
09/22/08 (11:21 PM) 
wow, j,...perfection at its finest...beautifully done...extremely intense...cannot help but wonder this Queen's identity.... 10 stars...all up in my soul with this piece...and a fave... xoxoxoxoxo lyric

  ButterflyDream
09/14/08 (08:11 PM) 
Dang this has really touched me as well.your rites are leavingme all mssd uo today(in a good way though,lol)you are so descriptive and know how to talk to a woman.your words make a woman fell cherishd on a whole nother spectrum.wow what a gift

  Untouched_Soul
09/05/08 (09:42 PM) 
swept away by the depth of this scribe and the music is simply beautiful ,,,thank you

  One
08/29/08 (06:53 PM) 
e Hidden behind the Jean's Theme that Make's her 2 Good 2 Be True...Not the Kitty's Purr that Inflict's Uphoric..bliss 2 you that Make's her A True...Catch....it's the Speck of Her Complex...Complexion..beyond outside's Text....It's that of Which No Man Can truly See...Just Feel<----very beautiful....much love

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