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"HER"
  by DC*


she's been hurt so many times her little heart cant take it she's been lied to cheated on and has had her heart broken she has cried the color out of her eyez no wonder her mind is so naked she doesnt have anyone to turn 2 but she has me i keep my word when i make promises all she has to do is trust me
i bet she has heard dat from every dude but every dude is not like me
my word is like a piece of my heart i must never break it she's crying out for help i just cant take it her mind is trapped by luv i pray to god that she makes it my heart beats like an african drum set because i feel her pain is it my mind or body that makes me feel this way her is for the girl that doesnt know me and i dont know she but one day she'll be the girl that i meet
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2008 (01:16 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 01/04/09 (03:24 PM)
Author: Samanthar
Poem Title: HIM ( Response to HE...

Date: 01/04/09 (01:56 AM)
Author: S.Maddox1
Poem Title: SHE IS HURT

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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  Re-Re
01/04/09 (02:54 AM) 
I love it! so sweet and i agree with smanthar, a gurl embedded wit so much hurt, it's hard to not think she'll get hurt again and again....i'm one of those girls, thats why i fear getting into another relationship. Good poem, excellent

  S.Maddox1
01/04/09 (01:37 AM) 
AYE BRUH I SWEAR WE SHOULD COLAB REAL TALK FEELIN THIS HERE TOUGH

  PhreeMiiSoul
12/26/08 (08:50 PM) 
hmm, want to be a hero huh? lol...i ain't mad at you, but sometimes the kind of woman you described is hurting because she depends on people to grant her happiness--which is A LOT of responsibility and can't be done--So be careful.

  Luvlee
12/26/08 (12:46 PM) 
aww thats whats up i hope you get to meet her one day if not already!!!

  Von-C
12/25/08 (11:24 PM) 
i love it... it makes so much sense

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