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"heavenly...on page"
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The Heaven Sword And Dragon Sabre 2003 (Instrumental).mp3 -

MAKE SURE THERES FOUR STANZAS...IF NOT THEN REFRESH THE PAGE....ENJOY

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thru the heavens..seems the hard work paid off
from the dead end jobs..to always being laid off
served the plate of life..that everyone else ate off
weighted down by burdens..but still manage to take off

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thru the clouds and the suns rays
finally stress free..no more living check to check days
just visions of praise
faught all my battles..might not have won many...but i still remained brave
dogging life's biggest bullets..heat seeking turning strays
i made it...i finally get to say
success is what i crave
moving past the points..that others said ide stay

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exploring the 7 wonders
arose from the water...when they said remain under
still flying in the sky..when they said ide plunder
was trapped in dark..now im in light brighter then tundra

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surrounds me everywhere
lifting me from the deepest of darkest lairs
easing the worries..of life not being fair
no more BR left in dispair
no more blank stares
words and phrases said...i dont care
just a new beggining
this time around..i only see winning
re born and re-living
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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (05:29 PM)
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  smooch
08/19/08 (05:39 PM) 
Yes Yes Yes the king is back ya back witha bang Im so Happy*smilin**jumpin up and down lol*damn i loved this this was a beautiful write and ya got a way of expressing ya words a favorite for reals

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/19/08 (05:32 PM) 
i digs

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