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"...Heat n' Tingles...{Complex Sex Context}"
  by ...Da Fort...


Tingling sensations
Eyes wide shut fully mooned
Encircled compass 360 sphere full dilation
Shapes forms time even momentum

Spatial distortion

(…Oral fixation…)

She injected inoculation
Experienced hallucinations

…I’m s0o0o high…

Parachutes fail at this elevation
Unimportant location
She sucked my ‘hard patience’
With meticulous haste

A rush of ejaculation

[[[Paralyzed]]]

{{{Tranquilized}}}

(((Soul suction)))

I

…!!C A M E!!...

To her fearless mouthed revelation

8 inch shaft veins racing
Pleasurable pain
Immeasurable strain

!!Damn what a culmination!!

…No hesitation…

She wanted her reward
Didn’t mind my ‘eruptive head’ she was facing

Her natural gunsmith obsession
Was to spurt my liquefied bullets
From my natural weapon
Sheets served as telfon vests
She caught my pellets
In the shadowed darkness sweating
Skin to skin friction
Her energized engine
Propelled squirting oil from my piston

(((Exploded)))

(((Overloaded)))

Increasing intensity intently
She boosted my adrenaline system

Demanded

To

(((…S M A C K…)))

Her thick ass

Until cheeks reflected light shades hand imprinted crimson

The room was an exotic universe

…!!Instigations reversed!!...

My bed was her created seductive prison
The tingle transformed to verbal curses
She said profane pigments the whole nasty prism

(((Accelerated exhaustion)))

Desirous 3rd round
Bound by curiosity
We’re fucked by our temptation
Only the night conceals nudeness

{{{15 minute orgasm}}}

The hotel TV flickers the HBO station

…!!Unleashed Freaks!!…

Found our match
My friendly revenge
She enjoyed her endless elations
Relentless poundings
Bed springs falsetto sounding
Curses of want mixture exhalation
The heat singes us
Our flames of lust
Rising with every tantric thrust
Every animalistic position

(((Sinfully Surrealistic)))

(((Explicitly Twisted)))

Wickedly falling into her tight taboo
Feeling her quickened body quaking

…Limbs shaking…

Euphoric seismograph internal thigh clamping emissions

That butterfly gave a sinister grin

Demanded

"Lets do it again!"
Let me put some heat on your body
To heighten our tingling conditions

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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2007 (12:17 AM)
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  mindigoblue
02/13/08 (12:17 AM) 
This is so o sexually intense and I love your metaphors. This write drips with a technological sensualtiy. The style is interestingly set apart from the usual. Great read, excellent write!

  shaybaby69
10/31/07 (04:38 PM) 
damn afta reading this joint here and looking at them sexy ass lips in the background i need a moment *lawd jesus* matta fact i shall return to comment on this yet again you have created anotha work of art just beautiful and freaky lol ~Kisses~

  Scriptixz
10/28/07 (02:23 AM) 
*gasps* must you share this with us? LOL boii...i don't even know what to say except i'm GLAD someone is finally making you happy- Burgundy Kid! :-)

  mariposa
10/17/07 (02:39 AM) 
so much action in this write! wow, i love the speed, it wasnt too fast, but it moved, and had a level of intensity that matched the intensity of the sexual energy between the two of u... in the beginning you kind of left yourself as a background character, yet were still able to keep yourself active, you brought your emotions, thoughts and sensations in at the rite times, with an effectiveness that really draws the reader in... "im soooo high" ... making the experience almost surreal, taking pl...
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  Afroditee
10/16/07 (07:38 AM) 
"...my hard patience with meticulous haste..." Backside!!! I hate to sound redundant, but only you can make erotica sound like a work of intellectual art. Fellatio here is sooo depicted as a literary art form (as the recipient would agree I am sure...LOL). You are a true wordsmith.

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