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"Headache Inspiration"
  by SlimCutta
  - This Poem is a response to the poem headachez(wonderfully achy) by itsnmysoul


the fact is - jill scott

My head ache inspiration..
Comes from the much litigation..
Of going back and forth with you..
Since im your headache.., you are mine too..
Throbbing and annoying..
With every sense of a headache coming..
But i also know you are my cure..
My tylenol PM..for sure..

You and i both know you give me..
Headaches...but only when i miss you..
Does my entire body ache..
I become quite lethargic..
And slow to respond and regurgitate..
Conversations of this or that..
Bouncing wors off me like baseballs to a bat..

My headache consists of you..
Thats when i truly know i love you..

Words projected through my ear canal..
All the way through my head..
And then even out my nose canal...
It hurts..and yes i know you feel my pain..
But only when does it get better when your love drops down like rain...

My headaches consist of you..
Thats how i know i truly love you..

Pain is the crime..and i am the victim..
Handcuffed to you well you and i become .."them"
I dont mind the temple pounding...
As long as i got your arms surrounding..
Typical love..is how i see it..
Since you got a headache...and i do too...lets fix it..
And try treating it..

Thats why my headaches..consist of you..
Because..then i know i love you..
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (01:23 AM)
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  BLACK STORM
09/20/08 (07:45 PM) 
LOL!!!!!!!!!!IT'S KRAZY WHAT A SIMPLE HEADACHE CAN DO......I FEEL U .........I KNOW HOW U FEEL.....THIS ONE IMA PUT AS A FAV KUZ IT'Z SO REAL AND TRUE.....I LIKE U PUT THINGZ......WELL DONE SLIMCUTTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  ComplexConfess...
09/18/08 (12:40 AM) 
Headache, being the presence of these deep feelings.. such a concept. It actually does get one thinking. Sometimes the most wondrous of circumstances are preceded by the worst headaches, the most troubling pains. Yet somehow, it all adds up to a sort of joy when the headache is over.. i guess that's what this write says. That in having that 'headache' .. you know that what you need and want is always present. Well said!

  unique1luv
08/17/08 (03:52 AM) 
diggin this write.very light n sweet yet truthful n real.keep it lyrical through tha pen slim.

  Demon of Darkn...
08/16/08 (04:43 AM) 
AS EVER SLIM YOU ARE THE MASTER OF YOUR PEN... JUS TAKE A LOOK AT DIS PIECE BEAUTIFUL.. AM WIT X ALL THE WAY.. DK

  XPERIENCE
08/16/08 (01:43 AM) 
i love this song... hmmm i know this feeling oh too well... love the ending... beautifully crafted....

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