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"Guess you could say my legend just begun..."
  by drybaggij
  - This Poem is a response to the poem You put yourself in the air... by drybaggij


Lil kid asked me why I wear colors if I don't bang...
"Cuz I'm fly enough to wear colors, cock sucker beat it!"



Almost thirty. so,
Low, riding dirty is a thing of the past.
Lingering snifflings reminiscing a time before

Growth. wood grain slick chain
Riding big body on hunnet spokes.
On ghost the tints so black,
Without a reason to hide.
Nah nigga, used to be there, pants sagged showing my

Underwear. Me and the nina... quite the
Pair.

All grown up now but be careful
when you stop and hate after you stare.
Grown, but when I was there,
was long hair
don't care
and I'll still take it there...
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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2008 (11:07 AM)
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  Esoteric
10/20/08 (12:45 PM) 
"all grown up now but be careful when you stop and hate after you stare"...that's whats up. haters come a dime a dozen. let them do what they do best..hate.....and the first two lines says it all. I guess some niggas still stuck in that mindstate.

  P03tIC@LLY SK!...
10/19/08 (11:39 PM) 
this is hot...the first two line mad me smile...LOL

  Beautiful Soul
10/19/08 (10:10 AM) 
And so it ends with a bit of reflection... Enjoyed and the track has been my anthem for a minute now... well done

  B. Rose
10/19/08 (04:49 AM) 
hahahaha at the first two lines yo... hahaha nice track to do this piece too.. perfect yo...

  Blakfiya
10/18/08 (11:34 PM) 
30 aint old, its just wise. Just figured out how to do shit easier..lol.

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