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"garden of eden"
  by B.R


touching on her fruit
the tree of good and evil
she's my temptation

the sun shines on her
she's my garden of eden
my tree of knowlegde

I grasp her leaves
tempted to drink from her roots
im bound to her tree

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (04:26 PM)
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  Snickaz
08/15/08 (09:22 PM) 
this was a nice write. i liked the comparison. that was a powerful one. keep em coming.

  L.edwards
07/25/08 (12:43 AM) 
wow really different feelin this

  D.O.X.
07/24/08 (06:00 PM) 
this was kind of ill for real...i like the concept...this was tastefully done

  ~* La Princesa...
07/24/08 (05:10 PM) 
i liked this one. very creative and not summin you read much often. flow was there nice!

  DOMINICANPOET
07/24/08 (04:37 PM) 
WOW WOW WOw this was pure genius i love this so much a straight fav and ten

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