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"GAME OF LOVE"
  by Lady Exclusive


I DONT LIKE AND CANT STAND THIS GAME OF LOVE THAT YOU GOT ME IN.
I WANNA CRY AND JUST GIVE UP SINCE IT SEEMS LIKE I'LL NEVER WIN.
"I LOVE YOU GURL", "YOUR MY EVERYTHING", "I WANT YOU TO BE MY WIFEY"
NEVER IN LIFE DID I KNOW LIFE COULD BE WHATS ITS TURNED OUT TO BE.
SOMETIMES I REALLY LOVE YOU AND SOMETIMES I DONT.
SOMTIMES I FEEL LIKE GIVIN UP BUT I DONT.
STARTING AT THE STARTING LINE CONCENTRATING AND TRYING TO GET A HIGH SCORE,
JUST TO END UP TRICKED, FOOLED AND HURT BUT YET STILL I WANT MORE.
MORE ATTENTION AND MORE GAME TIME
JUST TO BE THAT ONE AND ONLY DIME.
THE GAME GETS OLD AND MY FEELINGS DO TO,
SO WHEN IM GONE NOTICE THAT THE PERSON WHO LOSS THE GAME WAS YOU.
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (12:36 AM)
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  StraY12
12/30/08 (06:08 PM) 
Somethin' bout the line where you say "starting at the starting line concentrating and trying to get the high score" just sticks with me...I can see how this works, and I'm reeeeally likin' the twist to this! a very nice write! keep it up!

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