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"full of lies"
  by ash_g


broke my heart
to find out he was
so full of lies,
glad i found out when
i did because i was
ready to make this man
my whole life.
i loved him and every
thing i thought he was.
full of lies
as they spilled he
had to hear my cries,
he couldn't it he
was wishin he'd die,
or just be able to stop
my cries.
my cries made him hurt
on the inside,
and to think he wanted
me to mother his future
children.
says hes sorry,
wants to try again,
but he was so full of lies.
tears rushin out of my eyes,
body shakin,
the hurt starts movin
inside,
my love has died,
blood runs thin,
got my whole body
scared to love again.

♥ ash
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (04:56 AM)
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  RUTHiE
11/21/08 (12:58 PM) 
wow... now this was deep, i love the way you ended this piece.. "my love has died, blood runs thin, got my whole body scared to love again." DEEP DEEP DEEP!! lol.. i can feel ya girl. keep doin your thing!

  mz_April
11/20/08 (05:49 AM) 
dont i know that mama i love you soo much okay!!

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