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"Fuck a Dream"
  by Sum-Thyng Like a Poet


We must be something beautiful
progress in process
diamond in a coal mine
connected by the
hip
lips
nibble on one another tasting secrets
and I didn’t know love had a flavor
thought that was just some bullshit
but
He be so good to me
see
Him be sweet
ripe to the core
meaning
Him be
simply delicious
consider him those purple mountains
majesty I’ve heard so much about
I be the sunset that blankets him horizons
And
But
Only
we be comfortable in our love making
getting lost in night skies
And together giving
birth to stars
Sum-Thyng like a
phenomenal conception
He be that golden road that Dorothy walked
only difference is
this journey be exclusive
because see when him
click him heels together three times
saying:

There's No Place Like Home

before the second
we was in each other's arms
and I thought to myself
that we
Must
be something beautiful
honestly
But
I awake thinking
What If That could be
because dreams sure do make reality a bitch







Must Be Nice - Lyfe Jennings

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (11:07 AM)
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  SIDEWALKILLA
10/31/08 (03:46 PM) 
im diggin yor style: we be comfortable in our love making getting lost in night skies And together giving birth to stars Sum-Thyng like a phenomenal conception - no no no...this qoute is talking about the birth of yaself i see.....props to the two that got together and created....you

  HARLEMFINEST
08/24/08 (03:38 AM) 
I'M REALLY......FEELING DIS RITE....DA FLOW & WORDPLAY WUZ ON POINT...& WHAT'S BEST ABOUT IT WUZ UR LAST LINE...U CPOULDN'T HAD SAID IT BETTER....REALITY IS A MUTHAFUCKA....ESPECIALLY IF UR LIVING IN LA-LA LAND

  messiah
08/21/08 (07:56 PM) 
wow hot piece...i like ur word play in this 1...had my mind thinkin hard

  JIGGABYRD
08/21/08 (04:40 PM) 
LIKE BEAUTIFUL... FUCKED UP ENDING THO. I FEEL YOU THO. MUST BE NICE...

  *Miss Toya*
08/21/08 (04:03 PM) 
you have a unique flow...you should do some soulcasts...i like the way you laid this out and the background pic was a nice touch...

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