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"Fresh For Breakfast"
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She grits over
egging easy
extra cheesy
side of sausage
hash brown/home's fried
toasted/buttered
downing fruit...juiced

...fresh for breakfast

Breakfast In Bed [ft. Conor Oberst] - Dntel

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (12:02 AM)
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  alastor
08/06/08 (01:59 AM) 
No doubt nice recipe. Nice metaphors, perfect meal to keep 'em comin' back. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Kick it off with some kool-time spooning chicks always fall in love.

  --->ROXIE<---
07/27/08 (07:42 PM) 
I WILL NEVER LOOK AT BREAKFAST QUITE THE SAME....I SWEAR WHERE THE HELL DO U BE COMMIN UP WITH THIS SHIT???

  RUBY RED DBL R
07/25/08 (11:25 AM) 
damn the imagery alone wasnt enough, you had to go and put the picture up ion the background.... i love the metaphors in this write and also the style you used.... ok now i'm about to get frsh and make breakfast, i could start my day now

  *Miss Toya*
07/25/08 (10:53 AM) 
you something else...but *getting my mind out the gutter* now i'm hungry, and my lunchtime is still an hour away...:(

  Beautiful Soul
07/24/08 (04:32 PM) 
not only did you create another form or introduce one.... but the metaphor was...... sexxxxxy

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