NOT FOR THOSE WHO CANT GO DEEP!
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If I told you a story would you be able to hear me,
If I told you a story would you be able obtain it,
If I told you a story would you be able to understand,
If I told you a story would you contort my words into your own ending,
If I told you a story would you try and patent it,
So many living off of others pain and strife making their own personal story seem like the lavish life and forgetting the ones who started and help to create their chapter,
Ok let me slow down for some of ya'll cause this is bout to go deep,
And I know some are accustomed to being able to change the channel, hit pause, rewind, and purchase a new item, So for those people Im going to put this movie in slow motion so you can comprehend,
If I told you a story like young and the restless would you stay tuned because your favorite celebrity was playin the role or would you flip the script cause the story hit to close to home?
If I gave you a million dollars to sell your home which held your ancestors history would you take the money and live in Hollywood's limelight or would you embrace who you were and let the strength of your people be your spotlight?
Don't worry I'll still wait...............................
Wow it got silent I can hear the ants crawling,
Its funny how simple questions can make one question and think, It's time to slow down people because in one blink your material can be gone, so stop forgetting to love and appreciate who YOU are!
I'M REALLY FEELING THIS PIECE. I HAVE A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE. I SIMPLY AGREE WITH THE MESSAGE CONTENT . SOME ARE AFRAID TO SLOW DOWN TO FACE REALITY IN THE FACE. CONTINUE TO PUSH THE PEN.
This piece left a perfect taste on my poetic pallet lol this piece was smooth and str* and if it is like you said and this is a freestyle write You have talent drippin out of your pores like a Gatoraid Commercial
another great one girl. depth is your master quality. people do so much tend to get blinded by the apparent and fail to realize the depth and value presented to themselves. the depth a story was meant to deliever, not the recognition it can obtain. deep one girl.