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"freestyle"
  by DjWop





wow u bounce up and down
and never get the girl so stop fuicking trying you wanna be
when u up in this club u are like baby come on and the girls is like NO!
stop asking out girls you are never going to get her your fuckin faggot
ah ah ah ! hahahah
damn man you got fuckin powned
lmao next time u fuckin jew go to the natzezs and get your ass wopedyou fuck with meh you fuck with all of us d.o.g.g
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (03:29 PM)
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  A.Renee
08/20/08 (11:46 PM) 
i dont wanna be harsh, but i do agree wit ghost and ranson, people would diss the hell outta u if u say that in a freestyle battle, this one was iight

  'x'GhOsT'x'
08/20/08 (03:46 PM) 
Yo..Man..Try to rhyme for once..Try to use metaphors..This is a freestyle..Your suppose to go hard..You swore like every 20 seconds..This was just sad..2 stars..For real but yeah..N you can't be racist on this either by the way cause people are going to diss you up..

  ransom
08/20/08 (03:38 PM) 
lmfao your goin to get diss up by people for saying shit like that yo saying shit like that can get you jump n im not jokeing lmao who is this to anyway

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