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"freestyle 2"
  by A.K.Aking/anti cocky


wen i rhyme,i stay az real az i can be/
feel like i can touch da sky,birdz r ma feet/
wen i leave da game,im headed to hall a fame/
all der iz behind me iz traffic n rain/
buh ma tourch iz still lit wit flames/
wen niggaz claim ma flo lame/
it sit in ma veinz,u will neva suffer ma pain/
it hurts,i cant explain how hard i take it/
knowin im hurt inside so i cant really fake shit/
nuthin can change ma feelings or ma expressionz/
EVERYDAY I STUMBLE,MAKE ERRORS N NO CORRECTIONZ/
im on ma own hustle,yea ma own grind/
dat mean im a leader,neva follow behind.
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Date Submitted: May 30, 2008 (06:39 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/30/08 (07:34 PM)
Author: OGSoldier4God
Poem Title: Freestyle Too

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  nothin but the...
07/03/08 (12:34 PM) 
thys was nice.. you always semm to have alot of flow

  RUBY RED DBL R
06/03/08 (03:53 AM) 
i had to fav this poem because you have a sick flow and i think you have a great play on words the punchlines were sharp, i look forward to more like these

  Rebeltarmac
06/02/08 (12:05 PM) 
flo sic

  Loveychica
06/02/08 (10:58 AM) 
yooooo this is is extra d00p3! keep up da gd work! =)

  biscuit
06/01/08 (10:58 AM) 
i love spittin myself so i had to hit dis one first..dis was some hot shit..i see u jus started on dis bitch and feedin wit da poem comments and errthang..i see u playa..10

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