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"Freestly Fun # 10 LOL"
  by 'x'GhOsT'x'




Yes .. Another freestyle .. Having me some fun [ =
BRING IT!


Bringing fire like the king to the squire
Call me king call me a new buyer
Another beat to kill another murder case
Just in case the race gets mad
I wont frown I won't be sad
Turn it to a master piece
Like a Fifty-Two Lease
Like being a guy but being a Niece
A female trying to have her body for sale
Fuck making it rain I will make it hale
Snowing on the ground the beats hitting the sound
Watch me chow down on some beats cause I'm eating
Watch the girl call me because I'm cheating
Howling like a dog but to busy looking at this dirty smog
Pollution turning to a new world evolution
Sitting on the world like a whoopie cushion
Have the whole world trying to be pushin'
As my arm flex another king gets some new checks
Re-Using flow to catorize and new master minds whine
Cause I'm flowing like a shine
Call me a soldier but I'm crossing enemies line
Shit cops are here got to run leave my gun with hand prints
Eating beats down like mints the murderer is here
The beat is my friend and the pen is my gun

YA DIG!!
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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 (08:10 AM)
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  cookedcoke02
08/19/08 (10:14 AM) 
"turn it to a master piece- like a fifty-two lease" dat shyt is tuff!!!! "the beat is my friend and the pen is my gun" werdd!!! i can digg it! 10 starsz keep em comin!

  DonPoetiq
08/19/08 (09:55 AM) 
What's good brother? I read your freestyle. It was decent and interesting. I know that you have A lot more to offer intellectually...I can sense it. However, I can't mold you into a poet/You have to find your own voice. Some technical aspects about your piece. Masterpiece is one word not two. When one speaks of precipitation, it's hail and not hale. Also, check the word catorize? Did you mean categorize? Anyway no penalty, no foul. But, as writers, we want to keep every aspect of our unique wor...
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