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"Forest.. Heart.."
  by itsnmysoul


make me.. lovely like lavender
let my skin be the sweetest glow
sun kissed like sunflower
drown me in gardenias
and melt me in
honey suckle

let me drink from
clear spring water
and arise in the folds on suns
planets line to greet me
i rename them promptly

a world so centered around me is what i dream
i ding with the birds
and rewrite their personal melodies
rename me mother nature
i am now with the earth

we blend and mend, they kneel i heal within the forest
crested in nature
there is not
broken heart

if i drown my tears in sorrows.. all the skies would part.. to rain such a depressing
heavily rain the earth would weep
and play its harp
the melody for me..

the earth would weep tears
so vivid
blues and green
hues of violets too
the tears would be visible and kiss your heart with the most tender kiss
a kiss you would miss
and long for continually
in pain in agony
till it leads you back to me
deep in the forest
where i reside
there is no broken heart.
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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2008 (08:01 PM)
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  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
11/18/08 (01:14 AM) 
wow...i liked this.. a lot...u already kno u spit it...and i like the verbage that was what really complimented this piece...but ur flow has always been a unique and passionate 1...i agree with Slim on the beautiful write part don't kno abou tthe botanical mood theme yet...gotta work my way back from this write...lol keep it up as always ur words are inspiration 4 me..and i am sure so many other's...

  SlimCutta
11/16/08 (09:57 PM) 
I guess you in the botanical mood of writes...this is a beautiful write..a more watered down level than the previous ones..but it is a great picture to read and imagine.

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