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"fool...in love"
  by Ms. Hollywood


As you dig into the depths of my soul...my being-
When you pass my heart ask it has it been misleading-
Cause missed beatings, I assume, has got you confused,
But thats just because my heart skips a beat when I'm next to you,
And I guess what they say is true......
I'm A Fool In Love...

" Simply because: the feelings are not Mutual."

And..
And when you look into my eyes.. see serenity and peace.
When you look in the mirror, I want you to see another part of you, see me.
The love I thought we shared, I thought it ran deep.
But that was just me, obviously assuming, what we had was meant to be.

You Instilled In me Power....to go hour after hour...
Building your kingdom-
Planting your seeds-
Watering those seeds...to grow your flowers...
I guess you are indeed a coward...
Well thats what you've become since our relationship went sour.

"Simply because: the feelings are not Mutual."

Took control of my emotions.
Took my attention off anything else, no longer was I focused.
Devoted everything I have-
Gave anything I had-
Love just had to sneak up on me, and without notice.

" He Has A Hold On Me."

Broke down the very walls around my heart, I so purposefully built up.
In the beggining, you told me you was gone get me, silly me, I called your bluff.
So here I am a fool in love, your feelings don't mirror mine.
For three years I've wasted something I can't get back... TIME.

I gave you what no other man yet has had.....My heart.
Your Intentions from the start, was to simply play..... your..... part.

And You Did That....
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (06:48 PM)
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  MR. BYRD
09/14/08 (10:16 PM) 
man...this write bring back some memories...real talk, well not the part about "watering those seeds....to grow your flowers." but that was a hot line....great write overall

  LiL Chris 13
09/10/08 (07:20 PM) 
this a deep write right here very emotional but I think everybody can relate to the title of the poem cause I think everybody has play that postion of being the fool in love but nice write tho

  uhuru
08/28/08 (05:58 AM) 
another tight piece as usual. I'm def feeling the imagery and wordplay. keep it up ms. hollyhood. 100 babygurl.

  angeleyes1
08/27/08 (10:40 PM) 
very nicely written and so full of emotions keep flowing with your words much love

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