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"Foolhardy Fairy Tales"
  by One


She lies...

lately living it up
lately loving a lot less
leaving you feeling feeble
forlorn, forsaken, false, flagrant
feelings frittered away frivolously
feeling like fuck emotions today
they're never lasting until tomorrow
for real all you're asking for is sorrow
time you would have had to yourself
suddenly becoming bad for your health
frequently falling apart after losing heart
love never should you have let her borrow
you should've ran away that day & said fuck love
& then maybe happiness would have followed
instead you're the One left feeling insecure
instantly, while she pretends to be so demure
why you even had to wonder what was in store?
dumb chick always fucked & clucked quick
quite sickening, you ain't wish to believe
babygirl...basically she was a whore
casually alleviating herself of your amor
alas you thought you belonged
but couldn't have been more wrong
constantly coming ill equipped
she had to be about the bullshit
heart you had to been begging for
bastardized gently, happily ignored
handed back broke into pieces
somehow smothered in feces
treated as if diseased
shit's fucked up
love's fuckin

Obnoxious...

foolhardy fairy tales
you had best not

...Believe


Triptych Part One - Blockhead

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Date Submitted: Aug 07, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/08/08 (12:46 AM)
Author: ~Gitana~
Poem Title: Parable of Pretension

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comment icon  COMMENTS (27)
  Mz Cat
08/13/08 (06:04 PM) 
this is beautiful. i love your use of alliteration in this poem

  Lyrical Prince...
08/13/08 (02:16 PM) 
=] and i thought i was lovey - dovey . [ yo whereee you pick out this music from ] it was just a little creepy but enough to make me smile and not worry .. anywayss ... loved the last four lines .. truly captivating . this is a masterpiece . one of your best i`ve read so far . can`t even compare this to ... anything .. my admiration . ; leslie .

  *Miss Toya*
08/08/08 (01:44 PM) 
okay damn...i'm speechless...and we all know that doesn't happen very often!....i have to fav this...so i can read this again later when i'm not in work....um...yeah...this is something i would love to hear recited.

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/07/08 (09:44 PM) 
Flawless........ Definitely hitting the fav. vault...........

  H.H. Holloway
08/07/08 (09:35 PM) 
Well damn shit boogie-boo! I was going to write a response to this one but after I read it for the umpteeth--I realize my addition would be an insult--so I refrain--this was beyond bittersweet brilliance to say the least--As Afroditee mentioned--this is Poetic Masterpiece/Genius-Godhood material--I bow to your greatness--10!! and a Fav!

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