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"Fine Dime "Part 2""
  by kinnaird


"FINE DIME" part 2

(Louis): Hey baby whats up? i been tryna reach you bout an hour
(Gurl): Oh im sorry baby, i just got out of the shower
(Gurl): I was in the kitchen tryna cook and got all covered with flour (laughs)
(Louis): Speakn of eating, you the one i want to devour!
(Gurl): Haha! real cute! i was in the kitchen cooking and it was hot as hell
(Louis): Well how that meal turn out?
(Gurl): Judging by the way the recipe looked in the book, ummm, not as well! (giggles)
(Louis): Well thats good cuz me and my boy tryna do a double take
(Louis): He gone bring his girl and ima bring you so its sorta like a double date
(Louis): Glad to brighten up your day, hope its no longer gloomy
(Louis): Oh yeah, who was that that answered the phone?
(Gurl): Oh, that was just my roomy!


(Louis): Man, im so excited, i cant breathe i need respiration
(Kinnaird): Calm down, take it easy, i already made the reservations
(Kinnaird): I know you probably freakn cuz you be messn with some lame girls! (laughs)
(Louis): Naw, what would be funny is if we was messn with the same girl!
(Louis): Remember on the phone, you was about to invite your chick over
(Louis): She had you on hold and she aint never re-click over
(Kinnaird): Shut up! it is kinda funny we did meet them on the same day
(Louis): And during our description we described them both the same way!
(Kinnaird): Naw it cant be. the girls you deal with aint my type
(Louis): Vegeterians and libratians, naw, i like divas so i guess you right! (laughs)


(Kinnaird): Time aint gone move no faster cuz you keep lookn at the clock
(Kinnaird): Calm down bruh, they gone meet us at the spot
(Louis): I cant wait to see her, my boo got me sweat'n
(Kinnaird): I cant wait to get away from you, dude you got me stress'n
(Kinnaird): Dude if it wasn't for me where would you be?
(Kinnaird): Probably going on this date in jeans and a tee
(Louis): Please
(Louis): Man what time is it, damn man i hate this watch
(Kinnaird): Shut the hell up, get in the car and lets shake the spot


(Jen): Girl you lookn nice, where you going tonight
(Nikki): I got a date remember?
(Jen): Oh yeah thats right!
(Nikki): You talkn bout me, you yourself looking tight
(Nikki): Do you have a date too?
(Jen): (giggles) Yeah, i just mite!
(Jen): So umm let me see, where your man taking you today
(Nikki): say what, what you say, oh, he taking me to J's
(Jen): Yeah, thats a nice place to go on an open night
(Jen): They play real good jazz music plus they got an open mic
(Jen): You wana hear sumthn crazy, my man seekn me too
(Nikki) Let me guess
(Jen): Yep, the same place yours meetn you!
(Nikki): Let me ask you sumthn, did he say sumthn bout a double take?
(Jen): Yeah sumthn like that, sumthn bout a double date!
(Nikki): When we talked i thought i heared sumthn in the back but i dismissed it as phone noise
(Jen) Girl guess what?
(Jen/Nikki): I think we just snagged homeboys!!!


(Louis): Yo you got the bill tonight
(Kinnaird): What, why i gotta carry you
(Kinnaird): Everytime we go out i pay, i might as well marry you
(Louis): Hey man, chill homey i aint with that gay shit!
(Louis): Homosexuality aint nothing to play wit
(Kinnaird): Shut up, i aint tryna hear that in my ear,
(Kinnaird): Plus we at the spot
(Louis) I hope the girls here
(Louis): Yo i gotta hit the bathroom, you handle the man at the door
(Kinnaird): Hey homey whats good, i got reservations for 4
(waiter): right this way, i;ll show u were you seated
(Kinnaird): thanks, here's a 20 dollar bill you can keep it


(Kinnaird): I didnt mean to bump you, it was a mistake
(Lady): Watch where you going, all this space in this place
(Kinnaird): Your voice sound familiar thats all i could say
(Kinnaird): So when she turned around you should've seen the look on my face.........


(Louis): When I came out the bathroom, I seen this chick from a far
(Louis): So i decided until my girl come to hit on this chick at the bar
(Louis): And i aint the type of dude that like it when a chick turn me down
(Louis): So i approached her cautiously and spoke to her softly before she even turned around
(Louis): Hey girl how u doing, I would like to meet ya
(Louis): i can tell from the back your front got nice features
(Louis): You probably the type that like the strong, i know you dont like the weakest
(Louis): but when she turned around, it left me speecheless.........





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Date Submitted: Oct 03, 2008 (11:48 AM)
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  Suger
11/20/08 (02:52 PM) 
lol stop toyn with my emotions. i dont think i wanna be you friend. i actually got a headache tryin to think about the nex part to these poems youre writing..... you owe me an advil buddy!!!!

  Drew2007
11/12/08 (12:50 PM) 
THE BEST CLIFF HANGER.... HAVE ME WANTIN MORE... DAMN 10 STARZ ND MUCH RESPECT... AND A SPOT ON DA FAVS LIST... KEEP EM COMIN. UNTIL NEXT TYME. DUECEZ

  Shaysheree
11/02/08 (09:01 PM) 
Nooo...So what happens next do leave me hanging like this.

  tootoo
10/12/08 (06:27 PM) 
NiCE WRiTE MAN KEEP iT UP

  LyricalSista90...
10/12/08 (04:54 PM) 
OK SO WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?.........I'M READY FOR PART 3.

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