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"Fantasy"
  by Mr. RTJ


Sitting in the chair, with my eyes out the window
Can't help but daydream, how life could go
I mean, how life should go, like with my fantasy

Caught in a blank stare, looks like I'm in a daze
Oblivious to my surroundings, there's nothing that can faze
I mean, nothing fazes me, while in my fantasy

I escape at night when I lay in my bed
Close my eyes, try to grasp the dream in my head
I mean, pull to reality, my fantasy

It may rest in my mind but it feels so real
I don’t have to touch it to know how it'll feel
I mean, just to feel and hold, my fantasy

And I don't know how to put it in words sometimes
And I know I'll return to the world, but in my mind
I mean, at least to me, it is the realest fantasy

5/22/2006
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Date Submitted: Apr 19, 2007 (10:55 PM)
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  Vocab Vixen ak...
08/08/08 (07:39 PM) 
I liked that.. fantasy of our mind.. dreaming of it and going for it.. needing it... great write!

  shaybaby69
08/25/07 (11:11 PM) 
i agree with inspired love how you exprssed urself in this..i feel you on this too im telling you sometimes i can lay in bed at night and just drift away i love this

  inspired
05/09/07 (12:57 PM) 
all i can say is another great master piece expressed!!!

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