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"False Remedy"
  by Sum-Thyng Like a Poet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem silver tongue remedy by shyeboogie


He told me
let me ease your pain
So is he Dreaming with eyes wide shut
Just the see the possibilities painted on the back of his eye lids
to see how to masquerade a life of bliss for me
Guess he wanted to
Push me over a cliff and watch how angel’s wing open when needed
Just to tell me how beautiful I am when I fall

See his Pen
Tells lies like a 2year
telling a tale on their older sibling
just
Because
it’s easy to bullshit you
And he thinks I think it’s cute
So now every love poem he pens
Going to be him pretending to pouring his heart out on every lines
for me
So him took the initiative
first step toward me with a smile
and expressed the depths of his resolve
He said
the sun shines from your soul though your eyes
And sun kissed me with every ray of your radiant
And you left me sun burned to the point I started peeling happiness
because you left a glow on me
See the him as a poet memorized false hoods to tell me what I wanted to hear
Because a poet ’s living comes from
Selling shit that sounds good

Spittin Game - Anthony David

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (01:44 AM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
08/29/08 (03:22 PM) 
good response...showing a womam at a level that she can see the underneath shit that made the flowers look pretty on the outside

  One
08/21/08 (02:47 AM) 
lmao...that last line is not true...*shakin head...not in the least...well done and love the song...lol...*winkin

  Lisa20
08/20/08 (02:36 PM) 
Wow I like this poem the ending was really good.

  harley quinn/a...
08/19/08 (10:19 PM) 
very nicely done , and a very nice response

  cocoadiva
08/19/08 (08:46 PM) 
wow... amazing... i loved this piece.. excellent response beautifully written

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