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"False Mirrors"
  by caramel_skin


Lies deceit
It's our troubles we sweep
Under the rug
So to speak
Collecting dust
Beneath our feet
Masked by false mirrors
While shadows become a retreat.
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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 (07:10 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (21)
  williesidney
11/16/08 (09:04 AM) 
You made your point you just told it like it was and thats waht makes a good writee just keep blessing others ten stars.

  Jonathan Robin...
11/13/08 (01:18 PM) 
it's that example of staring in the mirror, knowing we like to change some things about ourselves, but never do it and wonder why life continues to bear constant weight on their shoulders. Great job!

  mscookie2u
10/26/08 (12:22 PM) 
AWESOME MAN, SHORT AND TRUTHFUL. TIME FOR ALOT OF US TO DO SOME SPRING CLEANING.

  Riolicious
10/26/08 (11:53 AM) 
I am really feelin this one ma. Short but sweet, u know. Great job on this one!

  Just Me...
09/20/08 (06:25 PM) 
Short but deep. This is so real. Our mirror and the one we show the world are definitely far from identical. Loved this piece sis.

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