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"fall back"
  by lilhazel


im startin to realize that things with you just arent the same
we dont have the same conversations no more lyke we used to
ereything revolves around sex , that's so lame
constantly all day im trying to understand you
so complicated i juz dont kno what to do
cuz you're the one i gave my heart to
help me out how do i fall back??
and find one hoo has the feeling for me that you lack
or am i trippin
you're giving me so many mixed signals
i've gave you all dat i could giv and if being confused is what i get back
den maby its better for me to jus fall back
it may not be easy but i refuse to get my heart broke
n fuckin wit dis shyte gonna make me have a stroke
i'm juz not understanding anything eith us no more
love doesnt feel lyke dis
you alwayz tellin me dat you love me and would neva hurt me
but with you not lettin me kno waddup wit us
hurts me way more den you'll ever kno
jus feelz like im in dis alone
da onli one das reallii inlove
if dat is tru den im just gunna fall back
thingz needa change soon or im not comin back
*~*lilrayray*~*
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Date Submitted: Apr 10, 2008 (10:12 PM)
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  THA M-F GUY
12/15/08 (04:55 PM) 
main it be dat way sumtymez fa reals 10 starz

  TWANGINU
11/30/08 (09:48 AM) 
i feel you baby...very nice write...sometimes you gotta get back before you get hurt..loving the skills you have...keep your head up...do whats best for you

  B. Rose
11/30/08 (03:14 AM) 
I feel this yo... first off you got have communication between both sexes yo... something im still learning but I understan why thats needed yo... eitheer way... nicely written yo...

  Fenesse Ashene...
04/12/08 (01:52 PM) 
reall relatable poem for a lot of people im sure... im kina goin thru the same thing so i feels ya on this one ma.. keep yah head up..

  Searchin lyfe
04/11/08 (02:51 AM) 
nice write..keep da pen flowin

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