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"Expectations"
  by Group: Erotica on my Mind


Tingling pussy,
wet with anticipation,
nipples standing
erect,
taut,
straining against
the fabric of the silk
teddy.
Breath,
ragged and shallow
with expectations,
yearning for him,
needing him,
wanting to feel
him inside of me,
strokes,
hard and slow,
building in tempo,
faster,
until there is no
you and me,
but we,
we have become
one,
united in this
act of lovemaking.
When complete,
we hold onto each
other's sweat
covered body,
drying in the
evening air,
contemplating sleep.
As we drift off
drowsely,
I hear I love you,
and smile.
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (06:34 AM)
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  Breezyboo
12/01/08 (05:42 AM) 
Wonderful write poet! I loved it!

  H.H. Holloway
11/24/08 (11:57 PM) 
Naughty Naughty Nightingale

  Lajhae
11/23/08 (12:17 PM) 
i agree with touchdapearl 100 percent. this is a true erotica write. u didnt just get into the details of having sex....u also made it very passionate. it wasnt just "fuckin" it was makin love :).... 10 stars all they way

  mz.i-20
11/22/08 (09:14 PM) 
yo this is hot this is how i feel everytime im with this boi im dating named brentay every time we do it im yerning for more i dnt have a care in the world its just us together united ...nice write ten stars i see were ur coming from

  MzJess
11/22/08 (06:38 PM) 
Whew. Thats Hot and very sensual. Gon Do ya thang.lol.

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