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"everything you've missed at home"
A 11th Wonduh and ~Unpredictable Nature~ Collaboration


  11th Wonduh:


(((tyburn & free verse)))

distinct
flavor
unique
passion
passions unique, fantasies i chase
sexinuss distinct, flavor [i] long to taste
.
curvy
gorgeous
divine
earthy
physical, curvy, beauty, divine
gorgeous earthy tones, opens my mind
.
blacknuss
ripe taste
moaning
obscene
diggin your ripe taste, blacknuss fiend
passion thrust, moaning, verbatim obscene
.
warm
pleasure
righteous
lush
lush warm noises, pausing of hours, feelin you
righteous passion, pleasure moments [so] true
.
consumated intimacy in the form of four page letters
romantic texts, passionate satiety, e'rythang you've missed
@ home. polarizing feeling l/ magnetic attraction
let me show you what you been missing
.









  ~Unpredictable Nature~:

evident
uncensored
perfect
sexy
it's evident how sexy you are,
just a perfect example of my uncensored fantasies
tracing your fingers thru my history
*
reality
ego
language
body
speaking honestly, thru our structured reality
the alter-ego inside of me, continuously positions her body to speak YOUR language vividly
*
humble
masculinity
me
dj' vu
*
(whispering)
your sweet masculinity.......you humble beauty, loving me with full duty
cuz with you
dj' vu occurs continuously
*
so i'll try to close the worlds together
because all of me wants to love you forever
unfortunately my actions reverse my words
so i'll try to close the worlds together
planted for live, for worse or for better...right now...
all of me wants to love you forever
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (03:41 AM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
10/18/08 (08:24 PM) 
SEXY AND BEAUTIFUL ALL INTERTWINED TOGETHER...THIS WAS LOVELY

  Ms. Sincerious
09/29/08 (09:05 AM) 
"because all of me wants to love you forever unfortunately my actions reverse my words".. this is why i love that thread.. because this is absolutely beauitufl.. the two of you flowed together so well.. ansolutely a beautiful write and i LOOOVE the title too..

  .Always.Catali...
09/07/08 (08:45 PM) 
HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THIS!!!!......goodgugmugga!!!....this was so fucking beautiful you two...oh I loved it from beginning to end...you both complimented each other so well...

  ~Unpredictable...
09/04/08 (09:37 AM) 
though I've come by many of times to view this piece.. I'm still very puzzled to wonder how NO ONE came by to see the beauty in this scribe...kinda pisses me off..but my words are not for the tweeny Lollipop tots..so I'll respect that I was granted the opportunity to work with an extremely talented poet...

  XPERIENCE
08/23/08 (12:42 AM) 
LOL at wonduhs statement.. i like how u two put this one together... the wordplay was mos def on point..and nice song choice..has me swaying side to side... i loved how u say..let me show u what youve been missing.. u two mesh well..nice joint!

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